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Posts: 5656 Joined: 10th Jun 2004 Location: UK | Posted at 08:14 on 26th June 2008 On 26th June 2008 07:57, Karen Pugh wrote:Hello Harry, I'm not into poetry much, but Iv'e just read your poem Futility of War. It's so sad, but so true as well. It makes you sit back and think what a mad, sad, world we live in at times. I might just change my mind about poetry. Karen
Hi Harry , my thoughts are the same. |
Harry E Wheeler
Posts: 171 Joined: 3rd Feb 2008 Location: Australia | Posted at 10:16 on 26th June 2008 Thank you to all who have given honest feedback to my poetry. Only recently did I become interested in the art. I have written a novel (100,000 words) based loosely on the life of Bothwell, third husband of Mary, Queen of Scots, in a modern-day context. For over a quarter of a centuryI have researched the life of this queen. I have also written a number of short stories. (Thanks for your efforts to trace the connection with Sywell Hall, Ray ) I am currently writing a novel - something completely different - set in Dorset, the County of my youth. 18,000 words thus far. Regards, Harry |
Ruth Gregory
Posts: 8072 Joined: 25th Jul 2007 Location: USA | Posted at 05:15 on 27th June 2008 Hello, Harry: Hope this finds you well today. I'll be praying for your recovery from your illness. Your writing is absolutely wonderful! Some people just have a gift for painting with words. I see you're in Australia, but I gathered from your poetry that you must have spent time in England. What's the name of your novel about Bothwell? It sounds intriguing. When we were in England last fall we visited Castle Bolton in North Yorkshire and I believe that was one of the places where Mary Queen of Scots was imprisoned. You take care of yourself, Harry. BFN, RG |
Lorraine
Posts: 215 Joined: 6th Apr 2008 Location: UK | Posted at 07:29 on 27th June 2008 Hello Harry and welcome to POE. I particularly like your "Memories" poem |
Harry E Wheeler
Posts: 171 Joined: 3rd Feb 2008 Location: Australia | Posted at 08:27 on 27th June 2008 Thank you Lorraine. You (and other's, of course) may enjoy some Assie humour Regards, Harry. Aussie-bar Gossip
I leans me elbow on the old oak bar In the best pub in town, by far I cups me ear to the Bush telephone And listens to the angry mob bemoan The gov'ment aims to put the prices up (Wait a tick while I ‘ave a quick sup,) Six cents there and five cents here Soon won’t be able to pay for me beer “And then there’s them increased taxes” Old feller standin’ beside me waxes And wot about the price of fuel Our treasurer can be real cruel He says it’s all for the common good I reckon ‘e thinks ‘e’s Robin Hood Sort a’role reversal in a way He robs the poor, the rich to pay! How can we survive, workin’ on the land? There’s no relief for a poor farm-hand I hear missus Kelly’s expectin’ another She reckons it‘ll be a little brother For her youngest daughter Kate Her old bloke was me real best mate ‘Til he laid up, followin’ a stroke A right real gent, a bonzer bloke All he can do now is sit and stare Looks right through you, like yer not there (‘Ang on a minute, while I wipes me nose) We all gotta shed a tear now an’ again I s’pose I hope Him upstairs will let me know When it’s my turn to go And He’ll make it quick – not too much pain I’ve had a good life; I can’t complain I know that when I’m in His hand Whatever comes next will be just grand So, if yer don’t mind Lord, I’ll finish me drink Before you pulls the plug in me sink! |
Lorraine
Posts: 215 Joined: 6th Apr 2008 Location: UK | Posted at 09:00 on 27th June 2008 Brilliant Harry, This poem is quite fitting as I was at my brother-in-law's funeral yesterday and he had his "plug pulled" very suddenly and long before his time....so as people say, "It's a good job we don't know what's round the corner!"-----now Harry, enough doom & gloom ----let's have a cheery poem please------------have a good evening(hope I've got the time right!) |
Harry E Wheeler
Posts: 171 Joined: 3rd Feb 2008 Location: Australia | Posted at 09:05 on 27th June 2008 Hi Ruth, Thank you for your encouraging words - I feel fine physically - tiredness consumes me unexpectedly from time to time, but does it not with us all I still do the many chores involved in running an acre of land, vegetable garden, poultry to tend and so on. I have a biopsy procedure on Monday. My Haemotologist was concerned that my wife and I will be travelling overseas for six weeks from August 1, but I am determined to make the most of it. Yes, I was born in London, but spent my youth in Dorset. The memories remain... The working title of the Bothwell book is "Yesterday's Man"- The current one, "Cataclysm" Kind regards, Harry |
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Posts: 5656 Joined: 10th Jun 2004 Location: UK | Posted at 09:33 on 27th June 2008 Hi Harry, I hope everything goes ok for you on Monday! Where are you travelling to? |
Harry E Wheeler
Posts: 171 Joined: 3rd Feb 2008 Location: Australia | Posted at 10:30 on 27th June 2008 Here is a sad poem with a modicum of humour, Lorraine... Thank you Lynn...destination Royal Adelaide Hospital...it can be Googled Regards, Harry An Ode to a Drinker
Liam Darcy stood by the bar His land of birth a distant far It was by choice that he decided To follow his dream that fate had guided This Irish laddy donned new regalia To start a life in far off Australia. He related to an unknown toper A down and out no-hoper What it was like to emigrate. Leave sister Mary and Patrick Nate, His younger brother and best mate To care for Dad and their sick Mother To mind the farm with the older brother He had no intention to return (He would however, sometimes yearn) To sweat and toil and turn more sod And every Sunday pray to God Instead, he’d make a living here And make more money to buy more beer. The fellow drinker raised his glass To indicate that he would pass Aside the offer of another drink That Liam generously proffered (To which he secretly concurred) And to the barmaid gave a wink. Liam counted out his change; No way could he afford a Grange Instead, he settled for another ale. ‘I often wonder what they are doing,’ His conversation once more returned, Regarding his decision to leave Eire, The land of lasses sweet and fairer. He guessed that they’d be forgiving Of his need to make a living Carting bricks to build new homes, Then spend his regular weekly earnings On smokes and women and other yearnings. I sometimes wish that they were near So that I could also buy them beer, He reminisced on life in Ireland. But then again, if they were here They’d stop me drinking Aussie beer Alas, poor Liam didn’t reckon Fate’s pointing finger, he, would beckon And so it was that whilst his drinking Served to clarify his thinking He didn’t expect to be called this day In such an inappropriate way He continued with his task Of drinking beer from oaken cask Until finally it occurred - He would not be deterred, He left the pub and crossed the road And was hit for six by his best mate’s car
That suddenly arrived from afar When they buried poor old Liam His family couldn’t come and see ‘im He lay alone in his cold grave His life, the doctors couldn’t save To all you boozers, if you have to drink Before you cross the road just stop and think You’re not immune to speeding cars So don’t stay too long in hotel bars. PS. A Grange is the most expensive of Oz wines (I have a bottle of 1971 vitage) |
Harry E Wheeler
Posts: 171 Joined: 3rd Feb 2008 Location: Australia | Posted at 10:54 on 27th June 2008 But then, this one may be more appropriate in my case! Aussie Bar-Room Gossip 2
I sits in the bar on me three legged stool Watching young studs play snooker and pool Young blokes braggin’ in wide open shirts Their sheilas a’wearing the shortest skirts Usin’ swear words that’d make me Missus turn In ‘er ashes restin’ peaceful, in the urn We was married for sixty years
(‘Ang on a minute while I wipes me tears) Poor old gal passed away five years ago I miss ‘er terrible, but that’s how things go She’s in good hands now, I don’t doubt I ‘spose that’s wot life’s all about I placed ‘er above the tavern’s bar She used to act like every one’s Ma Tellin’ ‘em when they’d supped enough- Some reckoned she was a mite too tough (They’d dare not look ‘er in the face) I bet she watches from ‘er secret place No-one would answer back when she spoke Always called me her ‘Fancy Bloke’ She’d not call me fancy if she could see me now The years are tellin’ on me wrinkled brow But I still ‘ave a twinkle in me eye When a pretty young thing passes me by Me joints are playin’ up now winter’s here And with knobby knuckles, I can't hold me beer And if the Lord don’t take me when I fall ill I ‘spose I have to face the fact, the Devil will. |