MariaGrazia
Posts: 711 Joined: 25th Mar 2008 Location: Italy | Posted at 23:10 on 1st July 2008 You've even got me reading it Harry, and I don't do POEtry unless it's in motion I'm learning because I can say chow, chiau, umm, err cia, or whatever it is!! Thank you, Ron.......both Harry and I appreciate the effort ;-) |
Harry E Wheeler
Posts: 171 Joined: 3rd Feb 2008 Location: Australia | Posted at 06:53 on 2nd July 2008 Hi Ron, I believe you refer to Paul Kaufman & Mike Anthony with their song, "When I see my baby What do I see Poetry in motion...etc". Glad to see you have become one of the converted, my friend...At 77 years of age I wouldn't be without my Po....!! ************************************ True, Maria, True... |
Harry E Wheeler
Posts: 171 Joined: 3rd Feb 2008 Location: Australia | Posted at 09:56 on 2nd July 2008 | quotePosted at 17:46 on 1st July 2008 Warts, boils carbuncles and spots When it comes to acne I got lots The biggest spot ever bin Was the size of a penny On the end of my chin It age me great joy and much much glee As I splattered the mirror in front of me Please don’t judge me by my cover !!! Which goes to prove - Mick - the basis for poetry exists in all things - as I said before, it is a shortened version of a story which you have to tell. For instance, please allow me to write your poem in short-story form...it would be something like this: "There are some people who suffer with warts; others suffer with carbuncles or spots. As for me, well, my problem is rather different. In the main, I frequently have an outbreak of Acne. One day, A huge spot appeared on my chin; it stood out from all the others - it was huge...damned thing was as large as a penny. I was concerned at the size of this blot on my otherwise reasonable complexion. I had no other option...I would burst this invasive outcrop on my personable features. I placed a thumbnail at each side of the "blob", as I had now named it, taking due care not to break its surface at this time - I was anxious to enjoy the satisfaction I knew would be acheived upon its final demise. I continued to examine my facial contours in the reflective surface of the glass before me. Yes! I would take the plunge and squeeze. I took a deep breath, and HO! out spurted the contents of the blight on my person. I relished the relief as I realized the "spot" and I were now forever parted. I smugly wiped away the contents of the "spot" from the glass, before washing both my hands and face, before departing the scene of my satisfaction. My apologies for wrecking a perfectly acceptable poem, Mick Regards, Harry PS. My 'demented'...her choice of word... daughter, was at one with you on YOUR poem... |
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Harry E Wheeler
Posts: 171 Joined: 3rd Feb 2008 Location: Australia | Posted at 10:23 on 2nd July 2008 I feel sure there are many among us who have experienced this situation.
I bought my son a second hand car It was the finest one by far Advertised on my TV screen The prettiest car I’d ever seen I took it for a trial run On a brilliant day with lots of sun The paintwork stood out from the rest Buttercup yellow – it was the best With black pin-stripe and tinted glass What more could anyone ask It went from zero to a ton In six seconds flat on a quarter-mile run On the wide and open highway It responded precisely my way It glided around the slickest curves (That played upon my passengers nerves!) And on the hills - it rode them high (My passenger gave a contented sigh) I drove it back to the yard Where the salesman stood on guard Awaiting anxiously, nearby Hoping I’d decide to buy I paid him for the asking price He thanked me – that was nice - For being so agreeable He then removed the ‘For Sale’ label And waved to us as we departed My son couldn't wait to get started His face lit up with pride (As I sat on the passenger side) Took his place at the steering wheel Adjusted his seat to confirm the ‘feel’ He strapped himself in for safety’s sake Selected “drive” and released the brake We drove home at a sedately “Fifty” My offspring, well, he thought it really ‘nifty’ To own his own car, for which I had paid His promises to repay, I fear, were loosely made. Harry. PS. I underwent my biopsy procedure yesterday, and my oncologist has arranged for me to visit him on the 7th. instead of the 14th. His secretary has assured me that he will have the results of the biopsy before then...I was previously told that the results would not be available to him for three weeks...a week before I and my wife go overseas. I am hopeful that, given those three weeks, he will start me on a course of tablets to reduce my spleen size... Now there is most definately a basis for a poem... "In me side I 'ad this oversized spleen The doctor 'e said twas the biggest one 'ed ever seen I sat before 'im with a permanent stare Then I thought to meself, hay, 'that's not fair' That souldn't ever 'appen ter me I'd always been pretty 'ealthy, you see So I says to the doc, "Is there a cure"? "Well maybe there is...I'm really not sure" Says me doc with a shake of 'is 'ead; And me, not wantin' to spend the rest of me life in bed, So I said "Oh well, if that's wot I've got, There's nowt I can about it if that's me lot So I went 'ome and considered me fate And thought to meself...well for now, at least I'm alive...and that's just great! |
Ron Brind
Posts: 19041 Joined: 26th Oct 2003 Location: England | Posted at 10:34 on 2nd July 2008 Very good Harry, I bet these posts have brought many a smile to the face of the forum members. keep it up my friend, really great stuff! |
Harry E Wheeler
Posts: 171 Joined: 3rd Feb 2008 Location: Australia | Posted at 10:35 on 2nd July 2008 Re - my last poem I shall title it "Not-so- poor me!" Forgive the typing errors therein. Harry |
Peggy Cannell
Posts: 217 Joined: 28th Jun 2006 Location: UK | Posted at 11:28 on 2nd July 2008 KATE The writer of this poem, was unable to speak, but was occasionally seen to write. After her death, her hospital locker was emptied and this poem was found. What do you see, nurses, what do you see?
Are you thinking, when you look at me --
A crabby old woman, not very wise,
Uncertain of habit, with far-away eyes,
Who dribbles her food and makes no reply,
When you say in a loud voice -- "I do wish you'd try."
Who seems not to notice the things that you do,
And forever is losing a stocking or shoe,
Who unresisting or not, lets you do as you will,
With bathing and feeding, the long day to fill.
Is that what you're thinking, is that what you see?
Then open your eyes, nurse, you're looking at ME...
I'll tell you who I am, as I sit here so still;
As I rise at your bidding, as I eat at your will.
I'm a small child of ten with a father and mother,
Brothers and sisters, who love one another,
A young girl of sixteen with wings on her feet.
Dreaming that soon now a lover she'll meet;
A bride soon at twenty -- my heart gives a leap,
Remembering the vows that I promised to keep;
At twenty-five now I have young of my own,
Who need me to build a secure, happy home;
A woman of thirty, my young now grow fast,
Bound to each other with ties that should last;
At forty, my young sons have grown and are gone,
But my man's beside me to see I don't mourn;
At fifty once more babies play 'round my knee,
Again we know children, my loved one and me.
Dark days are upon me, my husband is dead,
I look at the future, I shudder with dread,
For my young are all rearing young of their own,
And I think of the years and the love that I've known;
I'm an old woman now and nature is cruel --
'Tis her jest to make old age look like a fool.
The body is crumbled, grace and vigor depart,
There is now a stone where once I had a heart,
But inside this old carcass a young girl still dwells,
And now and again my battered heart swells.
I remember the joys, I remember the pain,
And I'm loving and living life over again,
I think of the years, all too few -- gone too fast,
And accept the stark fact that nothing can last --
So I open your eyes, nurses, open and see,
Not a crabby old woman, look closer, nurses -- see ME!
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Ron Brind
Posts: 19041 Joined: 26th Oct 2003 Location: England | Posted at 12:20 on 2nd July 2008 Powerful words Peggy (Kate), thanks for sharing them with us! I wonder how many others can relate to them? Far too many of course!! |
Harry E Wheeler
Posts: 171 Joined: 3rd Feb 2008 Location: Australia | Posted at 13:19 on 2nd July 2008 What incredible insight into the ageing process, Peggy, and how others, somewhat dispassionately, may perceive its effects on the individual throughout the physical erosion. The mind remains young, and nothing can erode that, despite time occasionally tinkering with it. Thank God there are those who have their eyes well and truly open. Sadly though, too few. Regards, Harry |
Sue H
Posts: 8172 Joined: 29th Jun 2007 Location: USA | Posted at 14:43 on 2nd July 2008 That has bought tears to my eyes Peggy. My mum had alzheimer's and lingered for eight years, he last nine months in hospital. I think I will print this out and share it with some care workers I know, it's a good reminder that there are real people living inside those bodies they take care of every day. |