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Ruth Gregory Posts: 8072 Joined: 25th Jul 2007 Location: USA | Posted at 19:16 on 11th July 2008 Hello Denzil. I was looking for you yesterday - Harry and Lyn even noticed and Harry even wrote a poem about it. Isn't it good? (Thanks, Harry!) I really love the poem you wrote for me, Denzil, so I wrote one for you too. But I don't want you reading it while Mrs. T's looking over your shoulder. Let me know when the coast is clear and I'll send it, OK? |
L Posts: 5656 Joined: 10th Jun 2004 Location: UK | Posted at 21:02 on 11th July 2008 Harry, thats an excellent poem! Then again ALL your poems are excellent! Go on Ruth, post it anyway lol |
Denzil Tregallion Posts: 1764 Joined: 26th May 2008 Location: UK | Posted at 21:40 on 11th July 2008 Much obliged to you Harry and I hope all goes well for you |
Denzil Tregallion Posts: 1764 Joined: 26th May 2008 Location: UK | Posted at 21:41 on 11th July 2008 The coast is claer Ruth |
Ruth Gregory Posts: 8072 Joined: 25th Jul 2007 Location: USA | Posted at 22:37 on 11th July 2008 Good, Denzil. Here it is:
Denzil, Denzil, what shall I do? I'm longing for someone, that'd be you. The poem you wrote for me worked like a broom Made me wish, "Why aren't you my groom?"
Not a groom like they have in Bodmin But a gent like you, not an odd 'un. But Mrs. T's back, she just don't know That she's lucky she's not with Paul in Padstow.
She came to her senses, and went back to you Maybe Kevin and Goldie made her true Or it could be your beard, or it could be your pink Or it could be the cream you like to drink.
She's always smiling, but you're never grumpy Even mornings after too much scrumpy. She remembers the Denzil from the days of courtin' Although there'll be no more rides on the Norton.
I just don't know what she sees in that Paul When she's got you, cuz you're such a doll. Even though with your hip, you're a little gimpy Your wisdom and kindness are never skimpy.
Why couldn't Redruth have been my town? That would be better than having a crown. Instead, its my name after too much sun, But I know your heart I would've won.
Living with you and Goldie and Kevin, And even the sheep, must be heaven..... Lol-ling about all day in the top field, But it's only a dream, cuz you're not real.
Thanks for meeting me once in a while And giving all the POEr's a smile. Denzil, Denzil, best bloke in Cornwall. I'll love you til I die and all.
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Peter Evans Posts: 3863 Joined: 20th Aug 2006 Location: UK | Posted at 23:17 on 11th July 2008 Awwwww. I had a lady write a love poem for me once, but her husband found it before she could give it to me. |
Denzil Tregallion Posts: 1764 Joined: 26th May 2008 Location: UK | Posted at 08:02 on 12th July 2008 Im in tears Ruth thats lovely and all |
Harry E Wheeler Posts: 171 Joined: 3rd Feb 2008 Location: Australia | Posted at 14:00 on 12th July 2008
Harry Vanity |
Ruth Gregory Posts: 8072 Joined: 25th Jul 2007 Location: USA | Posted at 20:07 on 12th July 2008 Lovely poem, Harry. Something more young people need to hear nowadays. |
Ruth Gregory Posts: 8072 Joined: 25th Jul 2007 Location: USA | Posted at 20:09 on 12th July 2008 On 12th July 2008 08:02, Denzil Tregallion wrote:
Me, too, Denz. (Sniffle). No fun being lovelorn is it? |